excellent
Brilliant stuff! the poem/lyrics were very well written but i woudl have slowed it down more at the start so you could build it up as it was quite fast, although the speed and monotone worked well none the less. very very nice!
Reviews for "The Tale of Mr. Carter"
Awesome
But the sound kinda sucks at points
Love it! 5/5
Very enjoyable. Thanks a lot for this submission. I'm sure other users have made you aware of the audio problems with it. I also felt the narrator was rushing on some bits.But other than that I cannot find any other issues with the video.
Thanks again. :)
SamuriFerret responds:
No problem. =]
Very fine, spooky tale,
I enjoyed everything about this except the voice-over. The actress' voice sounded great and set an excellent mood, but she could have recorded multiple takes, as it sounded like she was reading parts of it for the first time. I hope that makes sense and that I'll be seeing more of your work.
SamuriFerret responds:
Incidentally I don't think she did. Thanks for the review mind - I appreciate it.
quite enjoyable
i like the animation and story but the narration i felt you were trying to give a quick and ominous atmosphere with it but forced the sentences to rhyme the way you said it and it sounded dregged and took away some quality from the narration, however it is a great animation which you should be proud of, and it really is a slightly minor detail from an otherwise great submission.
mad props
SamuriFerret responds:
Thanks very much!