storyline
well, lets see... he is stranded on the planet. Apparantly he has crashed. He then discovers another crashed ship. He then eats his friend, the pilot of the second ship, I assume.
Reviews for "Losing Track"
Rutger responds:
Exactly :3
WTF
Wth was that. i am completley lost about wat i just saw. u still did some good animation but still it mafe no sense.
Rutger responds:
It makes sense, watch it a few times, think about it.... ;D
Ehhh
I can see that you have some artistic talent, definitely. I would suggest something resembling a plot, and perhaps and bit more time and effort. I know I sound like an English teacher, but I think you can do much better.
Rutger responds:
I know :3
Check out Zimmi EP 1. It has a storyline and plot.
I bet you'd like that then.
What?
Okay, ummm....I don't get it. I see a guy and then he blinks and then a spaceship crashes and he finds another alien. Then there's a flashy thing floating in the sky and the other alien flies away. An explanation would be nice.
Rutger responds:
Ahem.
Here it goes.
The Alien is lost on an unknown planet, and looks for some escape, or food. Something that will make him survive. While he's sitting against his crashed ship, another ship crashes on the planet.
He starts eating the other alien.
The other alien turns out to be alive, and activates an explosion. His eye survives.
what?
ok well I've just never been a fan of these weird artsy animations (I'm just guessing that's what it's suppose to be) but that's not why I gave it two stars. the reason for that is just because it was plain and simply well, sloppy. I mean there wasn't much of a background, the characters barely moved, the only real animation I saw was the eyes, and well it's not as if any thought went into the story line it was just random stuff. so all in all I just really didn't like it
Rutger responds:
Yeah, it's ok. I didn't put a lot of work in it either. So it's alright :3