Good and different but not as good
I can't fault your style and talent and I think the whole pencilmation line is brilliant. I can see in this one that you seem to have focused on the interaction between the various characters as opposed to the characters and their creator. Whilst making it different it sacrifices the humourous and unpredictable ideas that as an audience we look forward to watching.
To me pencilmation is about the story and interaction between the artist and his art and to take one of those away for the vast majority of the flash changes it far too much. I say this as a fan of the other pencilmations but to new watchers who have yet to see your other work this would be a great introduction to your Pencilmation adventures.
Whilst I understand the time and effort needed would be vast to do something with 5 or 6 characters, I feel this is what the series is about and needs.
Let me end by saying that your flashes are among my top favourites and dispite any negative things I may have said, in my favourites it stays :)