A Great First Flash
It was thoroughly entertaining, and your animation is something I wouldn't have expected for a first time effort. The fight sequence was well thought out but a tad bit anticlimactic. The monochromatic scheme worked well but at the same time, the poor detail in the building combined with the lack of sound effects made the fight more empty and less intense. But overall, a great flash.
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Not bad.
Not bad, the animation was in some part passable, and in other parts very good
the only problems I found were tiny little "comic book guy" type noticable differences with reality and dramatized fighting, they were many but trivial and it hardly matters when your talking about animations
a decent 7.
Good job
But you need to practice on faces and dynamic angles and actions
3/5
Rather good art, though the story was a little slow at times. For a first flash, I'd say you did very, very well.
yeah sorta
it was alright but really really dodgey at some points, seems like you rushed some of it, just take your time next time