Reviews for Diary of a Lone Butterfly

[LozzoSAURUS]

woooooooh

's looking pretteh gooda!
youve a really nice storey and plot thingie going on hnyah and you artwork and style support it vereh niceleh :D

althoughs im afraid the voice quality seemed to spoil it a little. maybe you need to get the voice actor to lean a bit further back from the microphone and then digitally up the volume to compensate. im not a techno geek but it seems the obvious choice, or get a better mic :D

other wise very good! great effort but again the voice stopped it from full marks.

[AlexLima]

A Poem

My death overtake you,
Before the coming of the fog,
As it sweeps along the ground,
Rolling and churning,
Creeping ever closer
To you.

May death overtake you,
Before a world without end,
A life with seldom chance
To be recognized.

May death overtake you,
Without remorse
Or reverence,
Finding solace in the
Fact, that life may not go on.

May death over take you.

[TheManWhoLaughs]

Great great gReAt

It is really great, your use of sound effects and voice is commendable, as well as your art style is fucking amazing, but i had a bit of a problem with the flash back sequence, as I started to lose interest in it as it drew on. I understand the importance of everything shown and all, and unfortunately cannot offer a solution, but I did nevertheless begin to bore me :( But yes other than that it looks to be an exciting series I look forward to with a powerful story with philosophical backdrops (and those are my favourite kind ^_^) anyway great job look forward to moar :D

[vladamre]

its interesting

i liked it, it was dark,

[servomoore]

PLEASE redub this

The art is very good, it's all timed well, it's interesting, but Erin Tenelle's reads are so damn flat and rushed that they sink they bring the whole damn thing down.