Interesting Style
Unfortunately, I found the voice acting unbearable. She needs to learn a lesson about inflection and another about characterization. Oh, and another about recording quality.
Reviews for "Diary of a Lone Butterfly"
hmm make it better
I watched it only once, but I guess its enough to make some observations.
The voice has no emotion at all! Besides, it's badly recorded, can't understand some parts.
Theres something with the perspective on the characters. They dont seem to follow the same perspective lines of the rest of their bodies, or even of the setting.
This is personal, now. I don't like much the style. Its like Samurai Jack, too many straight lines.
Hmmm...
Well, I liked this but it confused me a lot. Also, the blocky-shaped parts for the characters made it look bad. I also agree with the others that the voice was to bland. You should have had it a weaker more mysterious voice with a little bit of fear and nervousness mixed in. You should make a new version of this video.
nice job!
but weres the butterfly part?
I liked it a lot.
Intriguing. I look forward to seeing how this story unfolds. I may not be a frequent audience to this type of story or medium but that is what I think makes me want to review this story more than anything else. Other critics seem to find fault where I enjoy, perhaps jaded with too many stories similar in construct to see this one's value as I do. I hope the author can see through such critiques and find that this work was geniunely appreciated and at least I hope to see more to this story, it has such potential. I would gladly award a ten but I have seen some amazing stuff out here and am forced to reserve such praise as a ten for those projects that stun me so. Good luck and thank you. I was greatly entertained.