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Reviews for "Paper's edge"

Very cool!

This is a really clever little animation. Moving around your desk through different objects (multiple post-its, rulers, erasers, etc) really separated this from other hand-drawn animations on Newgrounds (of which there are few) and helped to sort of break the fourth wall.

Erasing every frame is sort of a pain and looks a tiny bit sloppy, although I honestly think it added a little to the overall animation. If you want to do this cleaner in the future, get a pad of acetate. It's clear plastic sheets that you can write on with Sharpies and other markers like that. You can get acetate at most art supply stores; I think it's like 10 bucks a pad. A little expense, but I'm sure it would improve your work :)

Visuals and audio synced really well in this video. The sound was kind of low quality, but I can see the file size is pretty big and you probably couldn't upgrade it with NG's file size constraints.

Congratulations on making a really solid bit of animation. This seems pretty likely to win an award, which it really does deserve. Hope your next piece is even more detailed and fun to watch!

stickbob123 responds:

(Thank God (i am a strong christian) that i got back on to the computer for you review, i read the whole thing!) thanks a lot! i will definitley look into acetate and see if this can improve my work! Always trying to learn new things and newgrounds is chuck full of it! (why i basically left youtube) thanks again!

Heh.

Hey man, nice work. I enjoyed the scenery, see you at school tomorrow.

stickbob123 responds:

My mom is still checking her email! Too...many...reviews to respod to on... Itouch! Anyway, thanks

wow

omg man this is amazing..great job on having the patience drawing all those stic figures :D

stickbob123 responds:

That makes me think.... I wonder how many I really drew...chAllenge to viewers, maybe?

Excellent!

It seems you've put effort in it, that i can't possibly not rate with a 10. I'm sure it took you quite some time, but in my opinion it was worth it! It was nice watching it.

stickbob123 responds:

This posidive feedback is so appreciated! Thanks for recognizing the time it took.

Amazing

This is amazing. Great idea, very creative, much respect.

stickbob123 responds:

Why thank you.