O_O
Man, that ending was horrible! (Not in a bad video kinda way, just in a sad, aweful kinda way.)
Still nicely made. The artwork was pretty well done.
Reviews for "Wanted To Be A Ghost"
ViNCeNT-aSMoDeuS responds:
Thank you. :)
Yep, that's Newgrounds for you
First, good animation. Nothing ground breaking, but you know how to do it, so that's good. I have to agree with the others in saying the ending wasn't all great... I mean, it's ironic, sure, but this has been done to death on NG. So many flash will have that sort of lame attempt at a final joke... haha death, it's shocking so it's funny. Of course, this isn't a humorous flash, but you get what I mean. If it wasn't for the ending, it would've been cute and had a more of a point to it.
But that's just the story, and the story is only one element of it, so okay. Otherwise it was a decent animation, it had a cute style, and the music was good too. Work on the writing and you'll have a good animation on your hands. Keep trying, man!
ViNCeNT-aSMoDeuS responds:
This is exactly what Hitchcock had to go through when he killed off the young boy and old lady on the bus.
I really don't like happy happy films, so an abrupt albeit slightly disturbing moral is the way to go for me.
Though I do agree, my scriptwriting needs work.
That's because usually I make everything up on the spot, but this is my first time actually trying.
Cheers for the critique.
Funny in a cruel way.....
Pretty enjoyable, great graphics and great music selection. I laughed at the end, with the "plot twist", Is that sick? Anyway, good job.
ViNCeNT-aSMoDeuS responds:
Hah, it's half and half.
Some people laugh, some people don't.
All depends on mentality. ;p
Thanks.
LOL
im gonna go play outside (BEEP BEEP) *WHAM* lol
ViNCeNT-aSMoDeuS responds:
lol, thanks.
Meh.
It was a good idea, but I don't think you pulled it off quite right.
I liked the music, though; coupled with the animation, it improved the feel of the whole thing.
The truck at the end was entirely too predictable.
ViNCeNT-aSMoDeuS responds:
Predictable, yes, but it didn't take away from the moral.
To pull it off right I'd have needed more time available.
My cap was 3 minutes, so sadly I couldn't evolve the story.