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Reviews for "Wanted To Be A Ghost"

good

good job and really sad

ViNCeNT-aSMoDeuS responds:

Thank you very much.

YES

I was worried at the end i didn't think you where going to do that.
I was hoping you would and then you did nice. Over all this vid was good nice cullers animation was smooth.i liked it

ViNCeNT-aSMoDeuS responds:

Haha, thanks.
Yeah, how could I not?
:p

Very nice.

I quite enjoyed that, and the music was used wonderfully. It was a moving and serious piece, but the ending felt like sort of a cheap gag until the credits started to roll. (Nice work with the credits by the way, the sketches were a nice touch.)
I'd say you need to draw out the ending a bit more to really drive the sort of catharsis you're looking for.

ViNCeNT-aSMoDeuS responds:

Thanks, and yeah it still needs more work, but sadly deadlines keep me away from that.

Meh.

It was a good idea, but I don't think you pulled it off quite right.

I liked the music, though; coupled with the animation, it improved the feel of the whole thing.

The truck at the end was entirely too predictable.

ViNCeNT-aSMoDeuS responds:

Predictable, yes, but it didn't take away from the moral.

To pull it off right I'd have needed more time available.

My cap was 3 minutes, so sadly I couldn't evolve the story.

lol

pretty good. i liked the twist at the end xD

ViNCeNT-aSMoDeuS responds:

Hah, thanks.