It was ok
But it really didn't need the punchline. Like a lot of people have already said it's enough just to have the boy learn that his family and friends would really miss him if he was a 'ghost'. But his death at the end was just overkill. sorry man 3/5 6/10
Then it wouldn't have given such an emotional reaction to the viewers.
I like to shock.
But it's all down to taste I suppose.
Thanks for the critique.
:)
What the heck!
I rate it five because the beginning was boring and the ending was the only thing that was funny was the ending
Oh right.
Thanks anyways.
Pretty depressing.
That was just way too sad. But I love "Extreme Ways"
It's meant to be sad. :]