AHHHHHHHHHHHHHEXPLOSION!!!
Only it was a picture, and no real movement took place. It was just brother staring down brother with music in the background, and then you drew them together with a white navi in the middle. The story-line was as good as the Beowulf movie (not the epic). Very poor. I will say though your style reminds me a bit of graphic novels. I was going to give you 4/10, but then again you did this on paper. And that's not something done very often so I give you an 8/10! Oh, and was some of the shots inspired by DBZ?