MUSIC!!
what is the song called??? its pretty good dude.. nice work
Reviews for "The Last Fight"
this is very good....
but i think u may want to change one word in the intro dialogue..... that's my only thing i see wrong with this flash. i'm not gonna judge u other wise. seenin i don't have ne work done here. good work! keep it up!
almost incredible
it could have been much more, if you ha dnoticed tha hovering blood spots, other then dat, it was prettty dope. 9.5/10
Impressive, with a few flaws.
The amount of effort you put into this movie is quite impressive, although a bit unnecessary. Like others have said, drawing tablets can help eliminate the need for scanning and transfers, along with the mild variations in each frame. This would help smooth it out. But, with the supplies on hand that you used, this is a well made submission.
The dialogue was a bit rough, but for not having english being your main language, it was decent. The story line was also a little rough, but the flash was ment to focus on the fight so it was an okay miss.
This said, I move on to the fight. Frame by frame is quite hard, but what i saw was a little... underdone. A few jumps, clashes, and then a classic style finish. Its not bad, its just that a little effort goes a long way.
All in all, I like it. This is the kind of thing that I get into. Its a music video that tells a story. The art isn't flashy, and doesnt need to be. It gets the point across. Keep working at it. you'll go far with your skill.
7.5/10 4/5
it seems u are a kenshin fan
Started off interesting until I noticed a few things which I will not devulge as it would ruin your work. You have a good sense of depth and color even though not alot of color is not utilized. The pacing was a little rocky but nothing to complain about. The text before the animation does not match the actual story as it is visually told and from the dialogue. I think you may want to look over what you wrote versus your animation story portrayal as it is more of a brother trying to save his mentally lost brother. Good start though but tighten it for your next animation. You have potential and you'll get to the top if you keep at it. And I think you know what I am talking about when I say kenshin.