You have a great sense of humor,
I really liked this. The part where Mario gives the peace symbol, the random blood in the level, the death of Luigi ;) Classic. And THE OUTAKES! Especially the 2nd one.
I didn't think the 1st outake was funny, and for comedic critisism: I thought that the power up part should have had one funny item not from the Mario Bros games! Like a Mcdonalds Cheeseburger or some random shit. I think I only suggested Mcdonalds Cheeseburger because I am eating one... sry.
Anyway, Sprite movies are all well and good, this one was exceptional. Keep up the good work.
Lastly, next time you should try voice acting instead of just using text. Even if you do a shitty Luigi impression.
8/10
RB
PS DICK JOKES ARE GREAT! I.E. Outake 2.