Reviews for Luigi's Confession

[Splinter-00]

Very funny!

I laughed pretty hard at that. Only a couple of criticisms:

1) If you're going to use text that you expect your viewers to read, make sure that the reading does not take away from the quality of the flash. Unfortunately, in this case, it did. Here are a few things you can do next time: Choose a more readable color, choose a more readable font (in both the flash itself and in the credits), and don't move on to the next subtitle so quickly--it was very quick, and only fast readers can read it all and process the story at the same time.

2) When you use other people's flash work, you NEED to give them credit. I've seen that funeral scene (in the third outtake) in another Mario flash (can't remember the name or I'd say it). You took an entire scene and did NOT give credit. That is plagiarism unless you give credit... so do it or you could get in lots of trouble. Plus, it's just respectful to the rightful owner.

Hope that helps! Thanks for the laugh. :)

hrechkaness responds:

thx for the review very informative and i liked that you kept it constructive so ill address the points. For the fast text I originally started out with a much larger script for luigi's part but obviously there was too much to fit. So in order to get the point across i dumbed it down to what you see now. I figured some people might have trouble reading it that fast so i made back buttons so you could retrace your steps so you don't miss too much. I felt the font colour was appropriate to match luigi's colour green ( which also is the colour of envy) and i was going to give mario some lines but its much better he just looks stupid and doesn't say nething lol. I do agree with you a bit with the type of font i just liked the style at first but i can see it may be kinda hard to read if your not quite used to it.

For the second point i gave credit good old randy in my authors comments. This is a non profit flash so i won't be stealing money or success from anyone ;) the scene your talking about is from his Rise of the Mushroom Kingdom part 1 and i have high respect for the original creator no hate intended ;)

I really appreciate you review and glad you kept your criticism constructive. Its reviewers like you that make me want to improve my flashes overall to help for better success so thank you :D

[mike13rox]

good job

you put the actull game into the movie really well, nice animations and it was funny!

[d-z]

the power up

is really funny lol

hrechkaness responds:

lol thx i tried to make everything as anticlimatic as i could thx for the review

[Kikoshou]

Wow, just wow

Jee, a sprite flash where Luigi is jealous of Mario and DBZ references are used? OMG how original! Man, the only that could have made it any better is if you had Luigi make a "Chargin my lazer" reference. Oh man that would have made it the most inspired work ever.

Okay seriously, the ending was something kinda new, but the rest was recycled trash. Can everyone just stop with the DBZ crap in sprite movies? I know its hard to make any kind of fights with sprites that don't involve cheap animation and beams, but its old now. And the over 9000 is just as old.

hrechkaness responds:

lol kikoshou this may be hard to believe but i am kinda on your side. you actually made me laugh when you mentioned the chargin my lazer part because i still thought that was funny and actually thought that was a good idea. I agree that these sprite themes with dbz references have been done to death but eventhough they are overused they are still funny to most and haven't gotten old yet(or maybe never willThat is why i made this animation so that i could please the greater audience of newgrounds and i guess annoy the few ;). Your review made me laugh and i share your pain a little over my success ;)

[legatoreaper]

Awsome

I loved how he just kept powering up. That was great. I also really liked the music.

hrechkaness responds:

the music is the theme from saw and i think is called hello zep. i also do enjoy the excessive power up makes it better for a more anticlimatic ending ;) thx for the review!