Good Start
I liked it, I just wish it was a bit longer. You should expand on this and build a story. Why is she Emo?
What does she do when she gets to school?
who are her friends?
Is she single?... Emo Girl is HOT!
Reviews for "Emo Girl"
carolshki27 responds:
hot, eh? ok ok. im doing part 2 but i guess i'll make another flash including both part 1 and 2 so that it could be longer..gah
Great
Great story. Animation just needs a little work.
Almost saved it....
Ya, It seems like a somewhat cool idea and style you have going on, but the whole ending unexpectedly and rough drawings made it bad. Fix it. Try again.
Good for a first time
Unique style and great artwork. If i may give some advice, try to extend the story a little more.
Bloody razor on the nightstand O_O
Not too good
This could really use some work. Try actually animating them together, rather than just a bunch of pictures. A clear "The End" kind of thing would be nice, instead of just looping it. I did not like your method of displaying text, most was hard to read and went by awfully quick. Keep at it, you'll get better