Not bad for point and click
Admittingly, the game was quite big, but most of the game involved a pixel hunt. Some of the puzzles could have been made a little more obvious to prevent tedium, but the game was difficult and quite long for a flash game.
To improve, I suggest more puzzles, more secrets and most importantly, lessen the difficulty on the Connect the Dots and Spider Boss. I died at least 50 times trying to kill it.