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Your drawings are looking pretty good. Now it needs to be longer, and it needs more animation. Your characters are too static. You need to practice at it and it will smooth out eventually.
Reviews for "The Last Hour: Chapter 5"
Jaiba responds:
yes with more practice i will be better than adam phillips. he and i are both award winning producers you know? thanks for watching
good job..
this is finally getting better.
you need to work on your voices, perhaps ask some people to help with the voices just so there is a variety and not just you.
that intro still tells the story rather then the animation however your style has greatly improved.
its still very short but i've got faith in you.
i'm sure you will continue to improve i mean this got 3rd place, there's your motivation to get 1st..
keep at it you're doing fine.
*Review Request Club*
Jaiba responds:
i am an irish immigrant i was trying to voice act like palpatine. thanks for having faith in me. thanks to all the support of my lovely fans jaiba productions is now an award winning series.
Yeah for effort!
It's good! Not great but good! I'd like to note though that this movie scored better than any of mine and got a daily award which I've never done so maybe you should start giving me advice.
Animation: As others have noted you used mostly simple tweens animation would be improved by increased fbf. For example the scene where the priest is walking towards all the other priests wouldn't have been nice if his arms had been moving rather than just his head bobbing up and down? And wouldn't it have been nicer still if we could see his whole body including his legs. The lip syncing and mouth movement was fine though. Just keep working on increased movement of characters, as others have already mentioned there quite static.
Sound: VA was a bit hard to understand in this one, but MUCH better than any of the previous ones. Hope you find a voice actor on NG I think that'll help you much.
Art: I think you've done real good here. Although in the scene with a ton of characters it would have been nice if there were a few more variations in the character artwork.
Directing: I still think your animations are too short this one barely stands on its own none of your others do at all. IMO there should be a plot and story arc independent which stands on its own for every movie you release, all though these can be building towards a greater plot.
Overall: You took my advice and look where it got you. Keep spending more time adding more detail and making character less static and the skies the limit!
Jaiba responds:
you are absolutely right. i should teach you a thing or two about flash. i've only had flash for 1 week and i've become an award wining producer. who produced such hits such as the last hour chapter 1 the search, the last hour chapter 2 , chapter 3, chapter 4, chapter 5 etc etc.
i had enough of you people insulting my voice acting. it's not bad voice acting i am an irish immigrant.
art? i think my artwork is better than yours so don't even talk about my art work.
do you know who you are speaking to? i am an award winning producer, Jaiba! they will all remember my name. you will remember my legendary name jaiba, award winner!
few days ago i was nothing more than a low class artist, few days later i became something like a world champion. i am an award winning producer, hear me! fear me! i am jaiba!
No one tells me how short my films are. what i decide to give these people i give. if i wanna give them this length then they shall be pleased and honored to receive it. do you know i am an award winning producer?
you on the other hand have a lot to learn before you are my equal. you are not even in my league. when you are on my level then you can criticize me. you said my movie was good but not great. how dare you! i think you are jealous. that's what. you are jealous of jaiba.
-jaiba the legend.
Is this the same series
Well your right this is a hugh leap for this series ,this is what i been waiting for.
Graphics. 6/10 I know that low but this did improve on the others, it was far more detailed. The Pope looked meancing the creepy look ,of the president i asume that who that was taling to the pope. The outline are still a little rough around the edges, it could be improved. The presentation is a vast step up from the other four.
Sound. 6/10 This is another better thing although you use the same accent ,it much more clearer. The speeches i can make out more better. The music was creepy and made this more special, and added to the theme. I guess the reason it does not get full marks as it still not perfect. As the voice you use does sound strange ,no offense im not insulting you. Although i think it may work.
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This is a better more polished flash the story is more interesting to me. The atmosphere is more styled. I enjoyed this more as the whole plot had a eerie theme which, made you want more.
The probelm again is the length although longer, is till to short. The fact you had to wait five episodes to get this far, is a shame it was buliding up nicely. The fact you could not see his head intill ,the end was a pity but that was okay. Sorry about that it was longer still.
Overeal a better episode still needs to fix the look and maybe animation.
review request club
Jaiba responds:
thanks for reviewing. i shall work on my voice acting, but why does it sound weird? what kind of accent do you think i have? just wondering. what kind of accent do i sound like i have? what country of origin? can you guess right? i am an immigrant who moved to the south. i shall make it longer, although 56kers will suffer. i hate to betray my 56k fans who message me with support thanking me that it isn't so huge so they don't have to sit for hours for a movie to load. but i guess i'll make it bigger. they will just have to wait for my movie to load, i hope they will still watch it. chapter 6 in process. check it out when it comes out.
-jaiba productions.
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Now you are finally getting somewhere! You improved A LOT since the last chapter.
The graphics look much better here. They are still a bit sloppy, but better than on your previous chapters. If you continue at this rate with your improvements, you'll be one of the top artists on newgrounds in no time. ;)
I liked that you cut down on introduction lenght. I think it was the first time the acutal episode was longer than the introduction.
I also liked the skip button you added there. That way we can jump straight into the action.
Also, you managed to produce a much better voice acting here than in chapter 5. Nearly no statics could be heard now. Great!
Still I'd say you should keep looking for different voice actors for your different characters.
{ Review Request Club }
Jaiba responds:
check out chapter 10. it will more than make up for the quality of this movie.
http://www.newgrounds.com/portal/view /457202
plus i've listened to all of yalls reviews