good job..
this is finally getting better.
you need to work on your voices, perhaps ask some people to help with the voices just so there is a variety and not just you.
that intro still tells the story rather then the animation however your style has greatly improved.
its still very short but i've got faith in you.
i'm sure you will continue to improve i mean this got 3rd place, there's your motivation to get 1st..
keep at it you're doing fine.
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i am an irish immigrant i was trying to voice act like palpatine. thanks for having faith in me. thanks to all the support of my lovely fans jaiba productions is now an award winning series.
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Your drawings are looking pretty good. Now it needs to be longer, and it needs more animation. Your characters are too static. You need to practice at it and it will smooth out eventually.
yes with more practice i will be better than adam phillips. he and i are both award winning producers you know? thanks for watching
Good but...
You are definitely are getting better compared to the previous episodes.
It is a good story but i think you should stretch out the episodes more.
Don't worry about the bad comments.It is just yous first series of episodes.
Remember practice makes perfect. :)
thank you sir for being a supporter of my movie. with your support i became an award winning producer
not bad
i wish it was longer lol thats wat she said but seriosly the way it was it seem it was setting up 4 a climatic battle
next chapter will be longer, and will reveal some new characters. thanks for your review.
-jaiba
Not bad
i don't know why everyone is reveiwing this so harshly. Its really not that bad. The lip synching was decent, the drawings were pretty good, the story was interesting and the music kicked in at the right times. My only complaint would be the voices. they need to be redone. but that was really the only major flaw.
i'll work on the voice acting, if it ain't good enough i'll have someone voice it. i'm looking for voice actors at the moment. so if someone wants to voice for my movies PM me.