Good
Ignore the bad comments, honestly the truth is, you are definitely getting better, and i must ask, do you draw the animations on the computer with a mouse? It seems that way. Also the voice acting is way better in this one. If you ever need voice actors, I could help, I got a couple up my sleeves. Anyways, keep it up I'm loving them so far. Story seems solid. 10/10 for what you set out to do.
cool i'm glad you enjoyed it. i was getting a bit down from all those negative reviews. i try to improve with every new chapter. i only got flash and learned how to use flash a week ago. yes it was all done with a mouse. if you would like to voice act for a chapter that would be cool. who would you like to voice act as? anyone in particular? well you can PM me with some sample voices. and we can work things out. thanks for your review!
-jaiba
really nice
great job keeps me in suspence, yes it definatly should be longer, but im looking forward to more, awesome storyline also
thank you kind sir. oh it will be even better come chapter 6. thanks for watching.
-award winning producer jaiba the great!
not bad
i wish it was longer lol thats wat she said but seriosly the way it was it seem it was setting up 4 a climatic battle
next chapter will be longer, and will reveal some new characters. thanks for your review.
-jaiba
Something quite rare...
That nine is well deserved. It is rare to see flash artists actually improving thier work these days. You show an astonishing amount of commitment and improvement. I finally found myself becoming drawn into the movie and am now looking forward to your future work. People have been mentioning the length being a problem, at the moment i can't see that its a problem because it is a flash submission and length is personal preference in my view. Your improving at a great pace and i hope to do some work with you in the future.
yeah it is a preference for the length. i like it that way. thanks for being one of the few who actually respect my work.
-jaiba
cool
a great suspenseful flash series, needs nothing added to it, the animations could be better but you are improving with time, keep at it
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check out chapter 10. the season finale episode!!
http://www.newgrounds.com/portal/view /457202