Reviews for The Last Hour: Chapter 3

[Haggard]

\m/

I can defiantly see an improvement here. The graphics are better than in the previous episodes, but they still are pretty sloppy. I know that drawing with the mouse is a pain in the ass, but Flash also offers a nice rubber tool. Be sure to make good use of that as it can be used to avoid that lines are drawn longer than needed.

I liked the new preloader better than the older one. The new one is much more present on the screen and the play button is visible at first glance.

{ Review Request Club }

Jaiba responds:

if you wanna see an improvement definitely check out chapter 4 and 5 and my upcoming chapters. Go ahead and watch and review them. Chapter socks will rock your world. Go ahead chapter 4 and 5, i shall wait for your review

[Strackenz]

hmm...

well... I think I see what your doing here. Your posting these submissions as a joke right? If not then you need to spend much more time on the animating and the art rather than depending on your colourful voice overs. The music is too loud for the audio and the length is too short to keep people coming back for more.

Jaiba responds:

no sir, this is a serious major series by the jaiba production crew. and the voice acting is the key feature by the legendary voice actor jaiba himself! but i will make the movie longer, more animated, better drawing

[X3cutioner]

you've improved..

i noticed their mouths actually moved!
the city looked like something from a worms game.
its still extremely short.
that voice over in the intro is still annoying even if you did change it.
but the intro tells the story better then the animation does.
should be the other way round.

*Review Request Club*

Jaiba responds:

wait till you see chapter 4, actually Chapter 5 is going to hit you like a rock. you won't even believe it is the same people that made 1-4. It's going to be the best you've ever seen. wait for chapter 5. but at the mean time review chapter 4. and get a responds.

[nijbu]

improved

ummm ok it was goodish still the intro and sound but chap 5 sounds good cnt wait (well sorta can but hey)

Jaiba responds:

it's going to be great. keep checking this week for it's release.

[Fro]

Well..

I'm really not going to waste my time writing a helpful reviews, because by reading the other reviews and your author comments to them this whole thing is just a spammy joke. Please don't waste the time of the review request club with submissions like this if you are joking. We want actual flash artists who are looking for helpful reviews.

Animation/Graphics - I could honestly copy and paste everything from my last review except for that this time you did have more animation with the lips moving and the arm moving, which is the only reason you got one more point on the rating from me.

Story - Nothing here, too short, just crap. It needs a lot of work and when I say a lot I mean a lot.

Audio - The voices are shit sorry to tell you, but they did go alright with the animation of the mouths. Not great, but not too bad.

Overall, if this is anywhere near being serious then please put more work into your submissions.

C52

~ Review Request Club ~

Jaiba responds:

i put more work into my newest chapter, chapter 5. i hear that the intros suck, so i decided to shorten it, and get to the point. plus i made a skip button so you guys can skip it. i'm still new at flash and i got a lot to learn. anyways there are more animation and better drawing on the next one. check out chapter 5 please. i swear it won't disappoint.