Stop wasting the RRC's time
Sorry bro. This is a joke, and a very humorless one at that. I had high hopes when I watched the first chapter but now I don't want it to continue. Please request reviews from something you actually care about next time.
Reviews for "The Last Hour: Chapter 3"
Jaiba responds:
i'll assure you it isn't a joke. i need to find a better voice actor, and writer. well for chapter 5 me and my good friend decided to do everything our selves, and i hope you'll give us another chance. chapter 5 in my opinion is the best work so far. sure i might not be as good as adam phillips but i'm getting there.
Well..
I'm really not going to waste my time writing a helpful reviews, because by reading the other reviews and your author comments to them this whole thing is just a spammy joke. Please don't waste the time of the review request club with submissions like this if you are joking. We want actual flash artists who are looking for helpful reviews.
Animation/Graphics - I could honestly copy and paste everything from my last review except for that this time you did have more animation with the lips moving and the arm moving, which is the only reason you got one more point on the rating from me.
Story - Nothing here, too short, just crap. It needs a lot of work and when I say a lot I mean a lot.
Audio - The voices are shit sorry to tell you, but they did go alright with the animation of the mouths. Not great, but not too bad.
Overall, if this is anywhere near being serious then please put more work into your submissions.
C52
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Jaiba responds:
i put more work into my newest chapter, chapter 5. i hear that the intros suck, so i decided to shorten it, and get to the point. plus i made a skip button so you guys can skip it. i'm still new at flash and i got a lot to learn. anyways there are more animation and better drawing on the next one. check out chapter 5 please. i swear it won't disappoint.
improved
ummm ok it was goodish still the intro and sound but chap 5 sounds good cnt wait (well sorta can but hey)
Jaiba responds:
it's going to be great. keep checking this week for it's release.
you've improved..
i noticed their mouths actually moved!
the city looked like something from a worms game.
its still extremely short.
that voice over in the intro is still annoying even if you did change it.
but the intro tells the story better then the animation does.
should be the other way round.
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Jaiba responds:
wait till you see chapter 4, actually Chapter 5 is going to hit you like a rock. you won't even believe it is the same people that made 1-4. It's going to be the best you've ever seen. wait for chapter 5. but at the mean time review chapter 4. and get a responds.
The Last Hour: Chapter 3
You have failed again, at flash.
your work is so simple, a monkey could do it, and you need a voice actor,
lastly, I don't want to sit here and wait 2 minutes while you retell the story that I just saw in the last episode, make better work, or don't make anything at all!
Jaiba responds:
i'm glad you enjoyed it, be sure to check out chapter 4 coming soon. this one had animation, voice acting. mouth movements and much more