I'm intrigued.
You say this one was lame compared to the more recent scenes you've done. As this was pretty good already, I'm sure the series will be a hit.
Reviews for "Asaroki 01- The Outsider"
good art
good art but the sounds of the footsteps and the ball bouncing on the dirt ground sounded off and i cant figure out whats going on from this scene but i will probally
check on episode two
Has my attention, but can't judge properly yet
The animation and drawing style was pretty good and interesting. It reminds me of a punk manga. I don't know if you did this on purpose but the women kind of looked like a midget(just to through that out there.) This flash didn't really show me enough for me to blow me away or judge it properly but it has my attention. Hmmm. A cool guy with wings choking peoples heads off. I'll watch on to see where this goes....
too short but good art
dude that was too short man, and it was very unclear but good job over all i know this was the first episode and it seems like you were still learning..
Can be improved
besides the flash being short, the proportions on the characters are weird, the texture on the background and characters are good as far as i no, i liked the moon, the story, well ionno too much except the girl's bro(?) and mom(?) being killed by a black winged angel(?) so i guess i have to watch the next episode to find out =3, like i said, could be longer. also one thing that bugged me is why the mom would run towards the killer instead of away from him with her child, i think she saw the killer, otherwise she wouldnt have screamed to begin with?