Interesting beginning.
Certainly in terms of sheer animational technique this piece was outsanding. Too bad that the audio quality wasn't as good as the animation though the acting was solid. All in all, well done.
Reviews for "Asaroki 01- The Outsider"
Good
I like your art style, and the mood set here. They go very well together. I'm interested in seeing where you take this idea in the future. Keep up the good work.
A decent start to an intriguing series
It's a bit too short, but it's very good considering the length.
Hilarious!!
Hahaha. I love how the animation is so purposely bad. The shading is just the right amount of awful, and the tweening was so blocky that I couldn't stop from laughing out loud. I nearly fell off my chair when the purple-eyed kid said "huh?" and raised his eyes up to his forehead. I especially liked how you split every single body part into a conspicuous symbol, so a whole arm would have 5 circles where the fingertips, fingers, hands, forearms, and shoulder were.
This is a great message to fanimators who can't draw. Kudos to you.
ArtistGamerGal responds:
Stop watching my videos if you hate them so much. I know you like sitting on your little soap box talking about what you think you know about animation, but you haven't submitted anything that says you have the skills to back it up. Some people are just learning and trying to have fun. Learn to check where you're standing before you open your mouth.
good
i thought that the animation was a good initial step, i thought that what you were going for was good with the hair movement being consistent throught the animation and the facial features showing expresion gradually rathere than cuting to it with as the dialog changes was interesting to see, perhaps redrawing some stages rather than moving and stretching them would prove to help your strong charicter presintation, 6 for animatiion 2 for effort