Interesting
This is something im srsly gonna follow, why?
because it was a great flash, story, artwork, sound and voiceacting were perfect.
great job.
Reviews for "Base 17 ::03::"
Looks different from the first and second.
This episode really needs subtitles. I totally can't hear what the girl at the laptop is saying though I sort of get the idea. Keep it up anyway.
Great
I completely disagree with oObugOo. The animation was not the best at parts but they are not taking into account how long you have been working with flash. The voice acting was decent in my opinion although I think you might need a knew Prodigy(he was so one dimensional and he had to whisper/shout in order to maintain that husky sound he was going for). Overall i thought the story to be very original and unlike anything else on newgrounds. The animation is pretty in my opinion and different than the prior episodes. Keep up the good work.
Nice
The animation was quite good for something on NG. Glad to see that there were hardly any tweens, but for the love of god do some life drawing! It appears you have a firm concept of how to draw from anime, but if you practiced with drawing from life you could improve greatly so your art matches your animation.
Otherwise it was an enjoyable watch. It had a good atmosphere which immediately set the mood of the piece, and was executed very nicely and quietly. The blue haired guys acting left something to be disered, but the blonde girl was one of the better internet voice actors I've heard. This was a solid piece, and only staggered in a few places like art and some audio mixing where it was hard to hear the voices. Keep going, you have great potential and I look forward to your future work.
Bubbowrap responds:
I literally laughed at the first paragraph; I finish my figure drawing class on Tuesday, and I started the class well after I finished the Flash xD Just found it sort of ironic.
Thank you! Hopefully, I won't let you down!
plot needs work
good animation and good thought but the script needs to be better and maby make it longer