Needs some work
I can't say I enjoy this too much, although I can appreciate the music for its qualities. However, as you said, it needs a lot of work to really be amazing. It's nowhere near unique, and I think you could have done a lot more with this.
3/5
It has qualities?
I personally don't think this is good at all, and if I still had the ability, I'd take it off NG.
But that was taken away from me when it hit 3000 listens.
I liked most parts but
I think that you should have used different intruments and i dont think it flowed very nicely.
I dont know what to say =0
It's a grait start, but you could improve this song alot. Don't get me wrong, it a good melody, but i think it could use more of a variety of instraments, plus alot could be done to fix up the drum beat. maybe even add in a bridge at 0:41. it would make it longer and keep the listaner's attention. hope this helps =)
Dude, seriously.
This song sucks, and I'm not even going to attempt to say it doesn't.
IDGAF about making it better. It was a little piss-together. I didn't care a whole lot about it in the first place.
Though, I'd definitely suggest listening to my other music. >:D
Really good potential but...
There's that stupid beat that starts at 0:26. Now it only becomes a problem at the end of 0:41 when it starts to get irregular. Then it feels like a woodpecker is trying to get in through my headphones.
Honestly if you made with without that beat (or stopped the beat in question at 0:42, or make it not so damn annoying) I would give this a 9/10. I would really like to see you take another whack at this song. I imagine removing it would be the easiest for you if you have other projects you're working on... Hope to see more!
PS: i'd donate but i'm a student and thus so poor I have negative money.
I wish I could remove it.
Like, seriously. It just won't let me. Because it has over 3000 views/listens. But I reeeaaalllllllyyy want to get rid of it.
I may eventually take another crack at it, but not right now. I've got a bigger project at the moment.
And I completely understand the negative money part. I'm a high school student.
On another note, if I do ever take another try, I'll send you a PM about it.
Moar bass.
Needs a better bump... Waited for the drop. But there wasnt any >>.