Pretty Funny
Were actually making a short ourself, hopefully it will be as good as this one.
Nice animation and nice to see Jim with a voice :)
Not half bad...
Reviews for "Jim and Pals Shorts: Ep 6"
Jimtopia responds:
Thanks, I like how this one turned out. Lemme tell ya though, shadows suck!
LOLOL
when something that is not ment to explode explodes, it is always funny.
got a lol, then a lol, then a hahahahaaaa out of me.
Jimtopia responds:
Awesome, 2 "lol's" and a "hahaha" from 1 cartoon!
Hehe.
Thought that would happen!
Jimtopia responds:
I do admit, it's kinda predictable.
Chucklesome
I love the joke here - gets me chuckling every time - but there are a few presentational tweaks I'd suggest.
Firstly, the beveled title text and circle doesn't look too good. It's fine on its own, but it just doesn't fit with the flat style of the characters (the shadow on the title and play button seeming similarly incongruous to me when they're not repeated elsewhere on that screen). Maybe you could spend some more time on the opening screen - have some bg colour, maybe redo the logo to fit the flat-shaded style?
Definitely give the play button a proper hit box. Maybe even have it so you can click anywhere to play.
Your graphics have definitely improved - I really like the line-less style of the bench and the bg, end text, paper and bg also look good.
However, I feel you should consider changing your characters' style a bit. Maybe either make the outlines thicker or nonexistent. Just now, they appear glitchy.
Also, their shapes look vaguely flat on the bench and everything - having one level of shading on them might make a massive difference.
A replay button should probably just make the movie replay rather than returning us to the menu.
Voices were really expressive.
Anyways, it was a great thing to watch and your graphic abilities have definitely improved since I last saw something of yours. I hope they keep doing so!
Jimtopia responds:
If I ever find a moment I'll change the title screen, because it really doesn't look that great, and I could make a much better one now. I think I may start shading my characters for the shorts, because you're right, it would look better.
yay for kabooms :)
funny stuff, this might be weird but i sorta hope this becomes a running gag lol. anywho great series (just watched all of them) and im looking forward to more.
Jimtopia responds:
That's not a bad idea (the "running gag" thing).