rofl!!!!!
lol! the drawings weren't amazing but it still was pretty funny xD
Reviews for "Jim and Pals Shorts: Ep 6"
Jimtopia responds:
That's what I was going for. :)
Awesome
That made my head explode from laughing when they blew up.
Jimtopia responds:
Dang, hopefully you'll be able to watch the next one; lol. Thanks
Great delivery
This series really does have a lot of good things going for it. The addition of voices only makes it better than those before. Now you've got an extra medium to deliver the jokes with.
I love the way that the hand grenade has been drawn and I'd be surprised if people noticed that there was something wrong with the image until Jim pointed it out. That's the amazing thing with cartoons - the surrealism allows the gag not to be triggered until it is needed.
The way that you've laid out the background is coming along as well - there is slight improvement to the detail, but I'd suggest that the next step is to add an extra to the next short. Have them walk around or possibly playing something in the background. Something additional going on would just add to it nicely.
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Jimtopia responds:
That's a really good idea, actually. I think (if the next one calls for it) I'll have the characters be participating in an activity. That could really help out the flash; thanks for the idea.
Lol...
Stupid pin...
Jimtopia responds:
They're real buggers.
Ahaha!
Ok, now THAT was unexpected!
Jimtopia responds:
If you pay attention to the picture of the grenade it becomes more expected.