Wow!
Being just a intro/credits, it looks like it will be a promising video.
Reviews for ""The Cottage" - (Credits)"
Awsome!
Cant wait til its released. My suggestions are:
Try not to use the Times New Roman font, or whatever your using.
And Raise the Frames Per seconds rate, because it kinda looked a bit joggy, this should make it look a lot more smooth.
Apart from that it was awsome! If this is how good you are when your just starting i wonder what your goner be like with experience.
Hmm...yes...
Well, I have to say that I'm interested as to how the story will unfold and how her character will develop, and the graphics were top-notch. Only the animation seemed a little stunted to me, but I really enjoyed watching it. But this is your first flash movie, so you get A++++++.
wow
whered did she buy that gas it was cheap
Amazing
First flash animation - but not the first time you've made computer-drawings. You've been creating art for a long time in Adobe Photoshop for quite a while, I can see that. And Adobe Flash CS3 fits perfectly for you, since Flash basically is much more userfriendly to the Photoshop users.
However, animating is just not a thing you learn in a few days. This looks like you've been animating for years (you might've practiced). You have skills, and just keep developing those skills!
It seems like you've been used to the music-mixer. Well done too.
Some constructive critism is always good: Try to raise your framerate a bit. It seems like it's running at default framerate (12fps). The "professional" (e.g. Disney) animations all run at 24fps. I know it's tougher to animate at such a high framerate, and it's not recommended if you're new at animating. Japanese animation on the other hand uses a low framerate. Try to raise it to 17-20fps, it'll run much smoother and you'll be getting used to that.
Well done againt, I'm excited to see how this story turns out!
Best of luck,
Vreal-Studios.