u first flash movie?
ah...you must be a artist!It seems ur movie has a good story.keep working on that.cant waiting for it
Reviews for ""The Cottage" - (Credits)"
Great
The quality is amazing. I have to admit im not too keen on animations that have a dark and misterious tone to it (thats just my personal taste), but full credit goes to you anyway :)
5/5
10/10
good, but doesn't belong here.
your animation looked great so i hate to bring this up but unfinished work doesn't really belong here, stuff like trailers and unfinished peices are referred to as ng alphas and should be posted on ng.mag(theres a link to it on the nav bar and on the submissions page) aslo, posting on ng.mag may benificial, feedback is usually better there because there are less newbs posting silly unconstructive reviews about how good or bad you are. out of the latest 5 reviews for this piece, there sems to be only one person who gave useful feedback. you asked for suggestions and flash tipsand you mostly got reviews like daeperez's review which just said "nice" , you may get more help on ng.mag.
by the way i think one way you can improve slightly is by adding more tone to the face, the image at the top of the page next to the "watch this movie" link, the girl in the pic only has shadow under her chin, i think it will look better if there was more dark tones on the people, it wil definately bring the quality up to the high stanard of the rest of the animation.
Wow!
This is your first animation!? That's incredible! I thought it wasn't going to be that great but after I watched it I couldn't help but give it a 5/5. Great job. Can't wait to see more.
I can't wait for more
All right, all right, this is your first animation... But don't tell me this is the first time that you draw with your computer. The quality was just amazing for a begginer. Dude This seems like a good story that I want to watch on NGs, Keep up the good work and take your time.
Preferably add a play button at the beggining or just use a NG loader with it if you want. Thumbs up anyway!
I liked the name of your company, I'm not a religious person at all, I'm an atheist but the name is quite ingenious. It resumes a big phrase in just one word and two numbers!!