4? 3?
I think your a little confused about how babies are made... the babies don't come out there...
Giving you a 4 to be nice.
4? 3?
I think your a little confused about how babies are made... the babies don't come out there...
Giving you a 4 to be nice.
that was pretty incredible.
i really enjoyed the cinematic quality to some of your scenes, and your overall style. the story was really well done, the only complaint i could have is that it seems like there could be more to that story, and you could have drawn it out. maybe as your skills progress you could go back and make this into some kind of epic :)
anyway really amazing work, good story, awesome all around.
:D:D:D
this is gettin a daily prize tommorow :D
Brilliant
It is brilliant.... I like how it went, but just being a grammer freak x__x Might want to fix a few words in the intro.... Mostly mistery=Mystery bothereed but but not getting to you, I love this ^_^ It was fantastic
very nice!
I *really* liked this. Your style showed through in the production, even if certain pieces were cliched [where's that damn accented e when you need it]. Your animation could use a little refinement- I'm not sure if you're going for a sort of 'messy-esque' line quality, but I think the tone of your presentation calls for a cleaner line quality.
As for the length... it was rather short, but I'm not sure it really needed to be longer- you got the point across in a very clear and simple way.
Lastly, I think I saw a few grammatical errors in the 'pre-movie script'. Don't recall them at the moment, but it might be something to look into.
All taht said, Very nice, especially for a first submission.
Hope to see more.