I couldnt even watch this...
While it wasnt horrible, the animation could seriously use some work, get yourself a decent mic too, the voice acting being atrocious and the lack of a decent mic didnt help. Of course you cant expect too many voices i suppose when only 1 or 2 people are making a movie.
Seriously, I think you would of been better off making up your own story, with your own characters... I really dont see much sense in people trying to get popular on this site ripping off other peoples IPs unless they are making fun of it, or making hentai.
When you get all serious with this shit, it gets boring... and sad... and added with crappy animation, its hours and possibly days of your life that YOU seriously HAVE wasted.
Remember, your making these movies for OTHER people to watch, think about what they might like, not the garbage you do. I tried not to be negative... but alas I am a negative person.