Reviews for Final Fantasy 7 -Remnant-

[Conal]

Nice try

It looks as though you spent a long time on this movie, but you seriously need some other software to draw with, That way it won't look like you scribbled the frames in a note book.

It would also be good if you have a slightly more realistic style of moving, sometimes it looked like a 2 year old made the people slide along the floor like a dog with an infected anaul gland.

Appart from that this was ok I guess...
But its gonna take more than a heavey load movie with pencil ledd on papper frames to impress me to 10.

[burin077]

Quality Counts

Alright, I'll list a few points that I was looking over.

First some positives; I definitely like the humorous feel that the flash gives off, stereotyping some of the characters was a funny touch that had me snickering for a good while. Also, much of the flash animation was very well done, it may not have been completely accurate as far as FF7 goes, but it did give that amusing vibe that makes this flash one to remember. The theme and thoughts of what had occurred though, it made for a very interesting idea for the future of the game, even if it was a spin-off. I commend you for this effort.

Now some negatives, much of the grammar was quite a bit off, which threw me off for a bit when I was trying to understand what was being said. That brings me to my second problem, the lack of voice clarity. It wasn't too bad, but some of the voices sounded too garbled for me to understand what was being said. In the future, I would recommend checking the grammar a little bit before finishing up the flash, as well work a bit on the clarity of the voice acting.

You're definitely going somewhere with this, and I wouldn't mind seeing more of this. I only recommend what I said above, the rest seems to fit well for you, and I encourage you to continue it.

- Burin

[shadow-night]

alright

here we go. first the intro not bad only strange thing is where did the blood come from on clouds sword. 2. the bike looked a little strange like bent up. ok now the good i thought it was funny how you made it sound like the sephiroth gene was a std and the kamehame was funny to over all i think it has potenial if you want tell me when the next one is out and ill see that one to.

SiMpSoN-bRuVaS responds:

lol yea the bike does look a bit strange xd. i will tell you when the next one is out, thanks for saying this has potential, =P

[ArmedCivilian]

Storyline wasn't bad, but animation needs work

Ok, I don't know what to say. I have played FF7 and watched AC, so I know the main story. The storyline is okay, involving suspense and not compltetely cliche themes. I kinda like how Tifa became a remnant because of Cloud(completely unexpected lol)

However, the animation itself needs work. Firstly, the voicing. Now, I don't mind the quality(I know you did it all yourself, though you may want a better microphone cuz I couldn't hear Barret really well). And the sync is a bit off for the mouths - not too big a deal.
The movement of characters however, was a bit bland and uh...kinda sloppy. For example, when Cloud walks to Vincent, he looked akward - something to improve on a sequel. But the fighting, where he spins his sword and stuff, that can be done better. Basically, you need more work on the art and how you put it together.

Another problem is the music. It TOTALLY doesn't fit the mood, because this feels like a comedy. No, I'm not joking.Why? Well Cloud's eyes looked like he was realllllyyy tired and reallllyyyyy bored or something. And Barret asks some questions, guess what? STDs(lol) is the answer to the problem! And why does Vincent say the "We'll see about that" whlie only Cloud fights?

So to sum up-
+Storyline is great and not cliched
+The voice acting is okay, but can use some improvement
+VIncent was drawn really good-And cloud...well make him wear
-Intro too long, and quite boring
-Animation needs more work - specially the walking and fighting movements
-The music needs to fit more into the scene(so do, some don't)
-If you replay it, the ending music doesn't change(go away)-just cut it on the dot or fade it

If you want to see some examples, search wolfenstein and watch Axis and Allies(4/16) - It's characters move 2d-wise, but it should give you some idea on what to improve on! Just think of this as practice =)

Take your time, polish this up! 7/10

SiMpSoN-bRuVaS responds:

thanks for taking the time to write such a helpful review i agree with everything you say and will use this to improve remnant 2 which will be released shorltly ill just go back and work on the flaws in the flash =P im glad you liked the story though =PPP yea and vincent should have fought (everybody loves vincent xD)

[sargervb]

Before I review in earnest...

... Vincent is extremely sexy. Straight as I am, I would still let him touch me.

Now onto review.

Artwork was fairly basic I thought (except Vincent - perhaps my love is shared) but nonetheless was effective. Nice placement of a kamehameha (lulz DBZ) and good storyline concept. On its merits I give it 9, but on its failures I have to deduct two points because of the use of Times New Roman as the font (GOD I HAVE TIMES NEW ROMAN... *deep breaths and a shot of valium*) ... ... ... *giggles* I'm a pretty spaceship... where was I... Oh right. Some spelling mistakes as well. It just shits me, mostly because I am a confessed Grammanazi. The priest says it isn't a sin and God forgives me as long as I keep letting his Holy Spirit enter me. No diea why God likes my buttocks so much.

Keep up the good work.

Sarge