Well here I am!
You wanted me to write a review, so thats what I'll do :)
Well, I can start by saying that I am kind of a fan of FF, and I think that you have done quite well on this one, the voices and the sounds were ok, and there was a humour part there. You have thought of most things but this can be greatly improved. The animation was also ok, but you can work on your artwork, the thing you should try to improve is your drawing and that is done by practice, practice, practice...! This wasn't much advice, but I hope that it will help you out.
I will see the follow-up if there is one(not because this was great, but I want see if you have improved and most people improve by just making more flash, sooner or later you're flash will end up at the front page if you keep on making more and getting better) and if you ever wanna talk so just PM me (I love to talk) ;)
-Oboti =D