Ke onda
OTHER FUCKIN' RIP OFF OF SMBZ!!! jajaja no es cierto man ;) solo ando jodiendo! que weno q ya te diste chance de terminar la quinta parte.
lo unico q vi mal fue los backgrounds, mejorales la calidad jpeg en propiedades al 100%, algunos sonidos me rompieron el timpano XD debes bajarle el volumen.
ya todo lo demas esta perfecto, de casualidad usaste la cameframe? si no la tienes, pidemela.
bye
10/10 y 5
Ok, te contestaré todo:
-Al principio si me creí lo de: "OTHER FUCKIN' RIP OFF OF SMBZ!" pero fue chistoso :D
-Los backgrounds a mi también me disgustaron mucho, no pienso mejorarlo en el próximo capítulo, LO MEJORARÉ EN ESTE Y EN LOS PRÓXIMOS!!!
-Intentaré bajarles el volumen a las canciones y a algunos sonidos
-Si usé la camframe que me pasaste hace mucho tiempo cuando me dabas consejos de flash
Muchas gracias por otro REVIEW CONSTRUCTIVO!!! así me gustan ;)
Y también los que dicen "AWESOME" "SO FUCKING COOL!""YOU ARE THE BEST" jeje
Nice but....
The dialogue in the text was not TOO well written. The grammatical errors don't usually phase me, and are a small price to pay for an otherwise good flash. But in this case, it really got in the way of enjoying this. But more relevant, the text went at it's own pace either going to slow or too fast (a "next" option would have been nice).
But visually, this was very cool. And, although the exclamation sounds of the charas. got annoying (didn't really mind them. In fact, they add spice to a feature. The problem this time around is that they shouted almost EVERY TIME a new chara. spoke), the music was very fitting to the onscreen action. Nice one.
Thanks a lot, now I'll respond the "WHY"
-My english is not that good because I'm mexican and the next one I'll see in a diiccionary before writing, thanks for leting me see that
-The next option is going to be really difficult, in episode 4.1 I was trying it but I had a lot of technical errors and puting sound effects was almost impossible
-I'll try to put less voices next time
Thanks for everything, this is the reviews I like most, CONSTRUCTIVE REVIEWS!!!
Good
Errors: Grammar=PHAIL.
Counter-Errors: Flash=PWN
Overall: PWN! 5/5, 9/10
hehe, thanks ^^
Honesty
Ok, honestly - The dialouge looks so much worse than previous parts, There is still no background music or detailed effects. Seriously, you'd think your skills would get better which each part, but I think it's vice versa.
ok, thanks for not saying "YOU SUCK" or something like that
Pretty Darn Good...
This definitely passes, this is the best thing I have seen that was still under judgement... I gave it a 5, because I like sprite movies, and this one deserves not to get blammed...
Thanks a lot :D