Reviews for Wrath of Shadow ep. 5

[SkyMan25]

Pretty Darn Good...

This definitely passes, this is the best thing I have seen that was still under judgement... I gave it a 5, because I like sprite movies, and this one deserves not to get blammed...

Shi-Gu responds:

Thanks a lot :D

[JamstaKILL]

ALL YOUR BASE ARE BELONG TO US....

is what the dialouge reminds me of. Other than that you have a decent sprite animation. I would say get someone who has a better grasp of the english language write the script for you. Give them your basic ideas and I'm sure someone will flesh it out for you. If you need help with that, give me a shout.

Otherwise keep up the good work!

Kill

Shi-Gu responds:

Thanks a lot :D
Everything you said was right :D

[Nick49]

it was ok

work on your grammar and work on your event timing (the fire started after sonic hit the ledge by about 2 seconds) other than that it was good

Shi-Gu responds:

Thanks :D

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[Chaos-Phoenix]

Nice but....

The dialogue in the text was not TOO well written. The grammatical errors don't usually phase me, and are a small price to pay for an otherwise good flash. But in this case, it really got in the way of enjoying this. But more relevant, the text went at it's own pace either going to slow or too fast (a "next" option would have been nice).

But visually, this was very cool. And, although the exclamation sounds of the charas. got annoying (didn't really mind them. In fact, they add spice to a feature. The problem this time around is that they shouted almost EVERY TIME a new chara. spoke), the music was very fitting to the onscreen action. Nice one.

Shi-Gu responds:

Thanks a lot, now I'll respond the "WHY"
-My english is not that good because I'm mexican and the next one I'll see in a diiccionary before writing, thanks for leting me see that
-The next option is going to be really difficult, in episode 4.1 I was trying it but I had a lot of technical errors and puting sound effects was almost impossible
-I'll try to put less voices next time
Thanks for everything, this is the reviews I like most, CONSTRUCTIVE REVIEWS!!!