Getting better
This was good. The sound cackled a bit towards the middle. I think you should throw Zero and Megaman into the mix. That would be cool, and people will stop saying it's a SMBZ ripoff. Anyway, funny, and good. Hope it gets better. I must see more. Now.
Well, the Megaman and Zero Idea I decided it a long time ago, so it will be maded, and when I reach to the end of the series, I'm preetty sure everyone is going to stop saying "ripoff SMBZ"
Alright, lets see...
Good movie overall. But it was far from perfect. First of all, the grammer... I have a big thing with grammer, and I have to say, if English is your main language, you really should have checked yourself.
Now the music/sound. It was good, up untill they warped through the pipe and landed in the ice wasteland, the music sounded like you just used sound recorder to get a free song. But, sound was pretty good.
Graphics is up next. Great! Except for maybe a few things, ie once that robot attacks knuckles tails seems to dissapear, but that might be intentional.
Overall, it was a good sprite movie, I enjoy watching it, thankyou for uploading ^^
Thanks, now let´s see
-Grammer: One of my biggest problems, I'm mexican so I'll try my best from now on today
-Well, I actually recorded it but I don´t needed to pay for the real song, it is just because I don't have the program to download it ^^;
-Well, Tails disapear is not intencinal, but a friend give me some ideas so now I'll leave it like that, just think it was intencional ^^
Thanks a lot, I'm glad you enjoyed the movie, that is the best part of the work :D
it was ok
work on your grammar and work on your event timing (the fire started after sonic hit the ledge by about 2 seconds) other than that it was good
Thanks :D
ALL YOUR BASE ARE BELONG TO US....
is what the dialouge reminds me of. Other than that you have a decent sprite animation. I would say get someone who has a better grasp of the english language write the script for you. Give them your basic ideas and I'm sure someone will flesh it out for you. If you need help with that, give me a shout.
Otherwise keep up the good work!
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Thanks a lot :D
Everything you said was right :D
Worth the watch :D
A nice little sprite movie, and too all the haters out there just because it uses both Sonic and Mario doesn't make it a rip of MBZ. The only thing that let you down was the dialogue...
Thanks :D
I think the same about that SMBZ problem, we just need to make justice, not against alvin, we don't have the fault, yes, I have been told my grammatic was grose, and that is because I'm mexican but I'll try to make it better in next episodes (I'll use diccionary!)