Credit something if you copy it...
Gahhh a complete rip off of the Beat up sand bag collab. If your gonna copy other people's ideas at least credit them and at least do a good job. The graphic were really bad.
I'm fed up of seeing these sandbag knock offs.
how is it a rip off!!!!
i took the concept of beating up the sandbag from super smash bros and made an ANIMATION from it, i drew everything just because there happened to be a totally different submission that i did not know about doesn't mean i ripped it off..
Pretty bad!
Okay, I wont flame this, but you really need to practice, and think once more before you start on a flash! I don't even know how this one got the daily 5th.
Okay:
Graphics: Monotome scenes. You reused the same boring scenes over and over again. Work a bit more on the scenery next time. Especially the sky. To pep the scenery up a little, you could've drawn a sun and skies for example. Instead of just a plain green used for the grass, you could've drawn flowers and grass straws.
Sound: What the hell happened to the sound effects? You had very few at the start, and then suddenly there were none. It's not enough to just play a song.
Story: What story? There was no story in this flash. Just a boy that spots sandbag, and then starts to beat him up.
And what the hell happened at the end? We see sandbag brake his backbone, but still he can fight?
Overall, if this is a first-flash for you, it was a good try.
But you need to practice on storytelling, soundeffects and the details on the graphics. ;)
Excited to see your new work.
It's very bad and horribly unoriginal.
First, you used the same music as the Nightmare City flash movie. It fit well for that, because it was cool and original. Not so in yours.
Your graphics were poor. The character had a shit walk cycle, and you can barely use motion tweens correctly. You shading sucked, and you can't draw backgrounds to save yur life.
Not only was the music a rip off, the entire concept of fucking up Sandbag over a speed metal song has been done. It's called "The Beat-Up Sandbag Collab", and it makes your stupid movie look like something I push out of my ass in the morning.
If you actually had a character with limbs, it may have been decent, but in a shitty attempt to cross anime with madness, you have succeeded in making a steaming pile of shit.
Not only that, Sandbag looked like a fucking tampon. If it wasn't bad enough that you just suck at art, you completely bastardized the one identifiable part of the movie that isn't even that hard to fuck up.
I only gave you a 2 because I know that it'll pass and I feel like getting points from it. I wish NG would stop mollycoddling all the fucking newbies and fucking blammed shit for not being high enough quality, ex. Your movie.
Work harder next time, this must have taken you a week at the most.
- Radioactive24
glad u liked it
Sh*t another 3 minutes of my time wasted
Why whas the bottom of the sandbag flat?
Why was the music very unappropiate?
Why does the guy dance in the start?
Why does his hair look like a hairy cap?
I didn't like this at all, it was very sandbag degrading
Graphics: U should really draw charachters not squares with arms and legs
Style: this has been done before, in a recent collab... think of something new man
Sound: I found the music a bit gay and it did not fit the.. movie?
Violence: there was violence... not very spectacular
Interactivity: none
Humor: what's funny?
And I know I haven't got any very good submissions yet but cooomeeooon!
why are you such a whore?