Eh not the best
It's good and all. The shading needs a bit of work. You need to improve on your characters along with backgrounds a bit more. It's not...that awesome spectacular..and It really doesn't deserve Daily 5th place but than again it's one of those slow portal days. You're lucky. Good timing on submitting it.
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ok...
umm... wow... not to be mean, but theres no build up... a random kid walks by, and sees sandbag and starts killing him. uhh, sandbag is too tall, and i would suggest using someone FROM the game. also, the kid's animation and sandbag's needs work. and i really didnt like the 3-D part.
Agreed
I agree with previous saying the transformation dbz part was bad. Please, show some imagination. You may as well have just had strawberry clock jump in and shoot the punchbag in the head, that'd been better tbh.
Secondly i think it was a TERRIBLE decision to use northen lights. you are aware theres a very popular flash (nay, 2) that use northen lights and this flash is very similar (but not near the quality) to that flash, so i was constantly reminded and comparing.
That out the way, i think it was a really good flash for a first time.
Humerous querks, like the punchbag having a spine, give you a much, much needed edge than just having it as a simple fight, bravo.
Promising ... just dont make stale stories, it kills your rating.
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where do you get the music for your animations?!
anyway, this was really nice, i like your timing.
Not bad
It was OK. I like the idea but the artwork needed a little work, like how the outline didn't line up during some parts. Not perfect but OK. overall not bad