A few points
I have nothing against the game but the fat that you based it in the game rather then your own universe shows a lack of effort and imagination. Also this is nothing like the runescape world. There are no giant battles and no one raids town... you can't raid towns. I can understand that you really did try to make a sentimental piece but unfortunately rather then deep and confronting it became corny and annoying. No offence intended but your voice is too weak and you sound like you have a blocked nose.
But after all this your flash skills are impressive and the choice of music was great. Maybe you should stick to those rather then writing the plots and voice acting
But after all this your flash skills are impressive and the choice of music was great. Maybe you should stick to those rather then writing the plots and voice acting