i have tips!
first off, that music was PEEEERFECT!!! amaizingly well composed and selected. music is always the first thing i notice (i want to be a composer), and u dotn know how many flash videos it ruins that would be good otherwise just because of bad music.
now a suggestion! make the puzzles harder. i found it waaaay too easy. challenge us some!
cant wait for the second one! im even into the story. good job overall!