Meh, fuck SheezyArt...
For something done in a single day, this was actually really good. A lot better than something I could pull off in a day (see my latest crap for stuff I've done in a day for proof[/shameless plug]).
I remember having a SA account once. Back when they were all "Hey, we're gonna update every two days cuz our site is crap, so you're not gonna be able to submit anything until we're done pulling our heads out of our asses." I got sick of it, and moved to dA. There is some drama on there, but it's all avoidable, as I'm sure it is on SA. Still, this example you've given is quite ridiculous and shows off exactly what it is that you're trying to show off. Good job.