Mildly interesting music otherwise a total waste
This was a waste of time. There was no story line. Half the time was spent running the credits. The graphics were of mixed styles and quality. Some of the music was interesting but the transitions between songs were poor. Only some of the dialog had vocals while the rest were silent for no apparent reason. I saw nothing here to make me want to see another episode. I suggest you just start over. There are plenty of examples of good work that could help you improve.