ok...
Well, it was ok. I've definitely seen better art styles, and the story was kind of cliched. I liked the voiceovers, however.
Reviews for "Well Enough Alone: Part 1"
Kuoke responds:
Story's not cliched... Well, That's if you actually KNOW the WHOLE story.
Don't worry, You'll see sooner or later ;P
Waste of time
It was ok I guess... The story was lousy and boring. I can't think of a reason I would want to watch part 2.
Kuoke responds:
Touche. But you should read the authours comment, stating that it's JUST an introduction. There WILL be a moderate war scene (if the script isn't changed) in part 2. But if you don't want to watch it, That would be your choice, so I don't mind either way~.
Im an animator wit nothin to do
i draw some decent anime, hoping if dats what ur aiming at, but it takes some time, so if u need my help PM me
Kuoke responds:
I'm not. I'm trying to create my own style based off anime. It'll change as I draw more.
Thanks for the offer though.
It bored me.
Make a sequel quick. I want action. Nice music choices by the way.
Kuoke responds:
At least ONE of the future eps will have a war scene. If that pleases you enough.
interesting but...
Ive never been one to get on people about there animation style but you cut alot of corners when it came to actual lip movements which basically underminded your art style. In english .. you have to show us some lip moevments.
It was ok script wise and teh story fell into place nicely, but it felt that things started to happn a bit to fast and sudden.For example the company president guy dieing then teh dude who was agenst what he was doing for teh company being incharge... all too sudden i didnt even get the feeling that he had something to do woth his, the presidents, sudden death. Which leads to another point give people names please. If i had to guess at what type of story telling you wher going for I would gues it was someting close to 24 *the tv series* but i couldnt fall in love with it.
Overall work on jsut a litle bit of lip movement while talking, and try to find a way to have thing s happen without them being so sudden.
Ps if they had names sorry i must have missed them...