It was okay.
It was okay. Drawings were good and sound was as well, however the plot was missing. I mean, I can see where you are going, unfortunately you leave too many holes in the plot that make it hard to understand what is going in. Mystery is good, but too much mystery leaves people wondering why they even watched it to begin with. I know that you will continue this and flesh it out a bit more, but for an intro you could have done much better =) Everything else is good though.
Touche. But you have to remember, All of this is just to explain what happens afterwards. If we made the 2nd part 1st, then you'd be in the state of "Wtf"ness.
Thanks though.
interesting.......
not enough character developement, we don't know who these people are or what they want,the faceless corporation bit is tried and true but ya still gotta give us a hero or antihero to feel something about.
cliffhanger, naming it part 1 obviously means part 2 in the least is in the offing, hopefully i will remember this one enough to want to watch the part to when it comes out.
also would be more interested if there was definitively something planned for part two that will bemore interesting.
In Part 1, There is no Hero, or Anti hero... Or is there?. The reason of all this was to lay out the storyline for the future, so that the future episodes will make sense.
Thank for reviewing!
Why...
... is it always New York? Is it the capital of the world or something? There are other cities you know! Others that are crying out for destruction. It's not fair, damn it!
I WANT EQUALITY! I WANT THE DISCRIMINATION TO END!
P.S. Don't even think about changing it from New York to Tokyo or something. I will seriously brain you.
P.P.S. I'm not serious about braining you. Whatever that means.
P.P.P.S I think you need some more regular camera angles. After a while it becomes obvious that you're avoiding animating and not just being artsy. I barely ever saw anyone's mouth when they were talking. Anyway, it was pretty good.
3/5
Hahahahah. Hell I dunno, You'll hafta ask KJL about that. If I ever decide to make that trailer of Part 2, I'll assure you, I'll show at least 5 other monuments destroyed.
I know, I'll fix the lip syncing in Part 2, Cause the FPS was at 42, and that was a bitch to animate lip syncing so I left it out.
quite good
pics: need improvement
sounds: good
the plot is interesting and attracts me to the second part
don't disappoint me!
btw use more detailed graphics
Hmmm....
The main menu and animation looked beautiful, the way at the beginning how everything seemed to move and come to life was great, i just wasnt expecting the people to not look all that good, im not sure who was in charge of art for the characters, but everything was out of proportion, and did look nearly as exiting as the environments and technical stuff used for the opening sequence and main menu. still, it may be because im a huge anti anime kind of guy, but i thought the voice acting and dialogue was kind of corny. id usually say things like i wouldn't expect much from a flash movie, but ive seen better, i still think it should turn out great if the voices and art for the people change. plus i understand how annoying flash can be to have to work with, and the temptations of trying to hurry things up and get it over with. but despite my harsh criticism you can believe me when i say, im on your side. >:)