not bad
but the music made my ears bleed
Reviews for "My New GirlFriend"
unique
this was pretty different from a lot of the stuff on here... you didn't go the "shock value" route, and i appreciate that. the jokes were simple--not really my kind of humor, but then again FAR better than the lame toilet stuff so many here at NG love.
My only real advice, as a writer... 2 things: first, the dialogue could've been a bit more realistic maybe? some of the interaction between the characters was a little obvious.
second... the twist ending was interesting, but i was hoping for some kind of overall point to it. the poor guy cries, and that's the end? i wanted to know why he did it, or what he saw there, or what really happens after he loses "her." is there some metaphorical message behind it all? is the guy just insane? it's an interesting concept that could've been toyed with more i bet.
i hope you make a sequel to help answer those questions!
Alright then.?
My one-line summary sais it all.
Pretty Good
Pretty Good, wasnt that funny though, but a really surprising ending.
not bad
it was pretty good but the only thing i dont like was the graphics and the way they ran/walked and their movements. but overall i think it was pretty funny and i think you put effort into this flash. keep up the good work. so yea lol peace out:)