haha i like it
that was good =D keep up the good work
haha i like it
that was good =D keep up the good work
Nice.
This was a fine original flash.
PROS: This flash submission was original and comedic.
The sound was great.
The artwork was well done.
CONS: The flash really had no plot at all.
It was a little short for my tastes.
The ending could've had more depth.
Overall, it was a nice, cute little flash.
4/5
Nice
this is great I liked the end
Haha chris girl is Flat
Shes flat chested and is soooo skinny she makes paper jealous lol
thanks for the positive review... I think? Anyways, i don't expect everyone to enjoy this flash or find it incredibly humorous, but please do not judge so harshly if you have never created nor wrote a story yourself. I respect the critics that say "it was to choppy" or "the story line could use a little extra." But when the reviewer just dogs the animation with no justification then I think that is a slap in the face. If you feel you have wasted 4 mins of you life on this toon then you should of stopped watching it way before the first min. Maybe you thought that there would be nudity or a fight scene but i decided not to go with the normal route.
However, don't let this response take away from other negative feedback. if you did not like the toon then tell me but tell me why with reasonable input.
Thanks - Lil' g
sounds like me
I'm giving you a 10 for the sole reason that my girlfriend is named amber. Also, i liked your voicing/animation