Reviews for A&K Battle Rocks

[Syzyde]

Not bad :)

Well LF, as you and I know, there's alot of people here in Newgrounds that don't like your animations...............at all.

But instead of being in their bandwagon, I'll review this fairly:

Graphics: 7 - To be honest, it wasn't the best, but it wasn't the worst. It had a simple and nice theme to it, but the backgrounds and characters seemed bland and stale. But it was a nice turn from the usual to have chibis.

Style: 6 - It had the regular "OMG teh ice cream everyone chase it lols" theme, and the characters seemed a little repetitive every now and then. But it once again, went with the simple style, and did decently.

Sound: 6 - The song was catchy, but the only problem for sound was; there was only the song. Put some punch sounds or grunting noises in there, and it could help.

Violence: 1 - Chibis beating eachother up over ice cream, no blood, no gore, no extensive violence. I like it.

Interactivity: 0 - Press play.................

Humor: 8 - Ah, now here's a strong point. The humor was easy to understand, and fun to watch. Plus the end had a nice twist to it. Good work there LF.

OVERALL: 8 - It wasn't your best, but it was simple and cute, but it could've been a little more descriptive. But all in all, it's not bad :)

kthxbai
Syzyde

[Fuzzymuppet]

Not bad I liked It

I kinda liked this movie indeed.
Im a huge LF Fan myself I love all your movies Joseph.

Only thing that was odd was that you had chosen Dr.Mario Soundtrack.
Didn,t completely fill out the movie if you know what what I mean,

other than that it was great.

[EL-7]

Decent, yet satisfying(?)

Why choose Dr. Mario music? It's not that good for this movie

[Malficious]

Gotta love the mario music

Great job as usual

[El-Cid]

Is this a joke?

I'm going to tell you this plainly, because you have a serious following, and it saddens me that you are abusing your influence and spoon feeding shit to impressionable people.

Learn how to draw characters with appeal and proper construction. It's been half a decade and they still look like cardboard. It's not stylish, it's amateur. Style only surfaces after you've taught yourself fundamental art principles.

Learn how to give texture to your animations with proper staging, slow ins and outs, overlapping action, weight, timing, and maybe, just maybe some secondary action. All your characters look like weightless robots suffering form arthritis.

Learn some color theory and quit using high saturated colors and primaries for EVERY damn color. It clashes and you can't even tell where to draw your attention too. For the record, Green, blue and orange is a disgusting combination.

Learn something about composition and shot staging.

I can't say much for content, because you at least tried to be original here. It wasn't your typical videogame rip (besides the music). The idea, if executed correctly, might have been worth the watch.

At the very least, I think your fans are growing up and starting to realize that your submissions are lacking, just by eyeballing the scores you've been getting.