its been done
his was better.
Reviews for "the potal system 1 s.e."
sweet
it could have been longer though....
Da-raven responds:
thx
Been done so many times.
This isn't the first flash of this type, there are so many metaphor flashes of the portal's judgement system, all are done far better. Okay you added some music. There are still some flaws I feel, which are below.
The "action" of fighting against the 0s was not engaging at all, it was slow and at the start, the flash file touched the 0 slowly and threw it against the wall... okay.
There's no unique style. I mean. You look at Von Bruck's Under Judgement. He has that style that you cannot deny. I struggled to see an indentity in this flash. Now don't blame yourself for this. Being creative is hard to do and it won't just click in a second, you have to think about it long and hard, give it your own stamp of personality.
This isn't a rant and I appreciate your work. But I just feel as though it could be improved. Don't take these comments the wrong way.
Da-raven responds:
i dont take it the wrong way. i now see that i could have improved
Creative
I liked the idea of him in a room fighting 0s,very creative.But i know where you got the idea.The movement was a little too slow.Keep up the work
ho hum
I like this. It's not anything special, but it is an accurate depiction of the feeling of being under judgement. It's brutal in there!