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Reviews for "the potal system 1 s.e."

I remember the first one, and this is better

But it still needs a lot of improvement. You added music, but you need sound effects too, like when someone gets punched, make a 'dooogh' sorta fighting noise. And make try to make the violence a bit more graphic, such as when he was stabbing the zeros, show him actually stabbing them etc.
Yeah so just clean it up a bit, and you'll get a higher score. Better than before, so good work.

same thing every flash about a flash

Its the same thing a flash document vs. blammage

a bit much

It seems like these types of movies are contagious. The first one was origional and interesting...but now its just a submitted movie about submitting a movie. No one wants to hear about the dream you had about having a dream.

Da-raven responds:

maybe ur right

bad

that was preety bad.
you need to improve on the graphics alot.
you also needed to improve the sound.
the violence was the only good thing about it
YAAAAAAY violence

Da-raven responds:

not like your score will do anything, level 1 lol

LOL!

Funny, reminded me of all of my flash cartoons...being ZEROED!

Da-raven responds:

thanks for the decent rating