ho hum
I like this. It's not anything special, but it is an accurate depiction of the feeling of being under judgement. It's brutal in there!
Reviews for "the potal system 1 s.e."
meh
like i said MEH!!!!!
I remember the first one, and this is better
But it still needs a lot of improvement. You added music, but you need sound effects too, like when someone gets punched, make a 'dooogh' sorta fighting noise. And make try to make the violence a bit more graphic, such as when he was stabbing the zeros, show him actually stabbing them etc.
Yeah so just clean it up a bit, and you'll get a higher score. Better than before, so good work.
its been done
his was better.
a bit much
It seems like these types of movies are contagious. The first one was origional and interesting...but now its just a submitted movie about submitting a movie. No one wants to hear about the dream you had about having a dream.
Da-raven responds:
maybe ur right